I love this piece. It's simple, yet beautifully shaded, and exceptionally detailed and drawn. Let's start with Twi. She looks small, compared to the beach, and celestia. Her design is so well drawn, with her hunched back and her depressed look. Your representation of a beach is unique, and it does fit with some very exotic beaches around the world. Great beach design, with the cleanest of waters and the smoothest of sands it seems. Celestia looks great like a ghost, and how she just is behind that rock, but also in Twi's mind. At least that is what I see. A fantastic 9.5/10!