The morning after - V2

Very well done!! I admire your eye of color. I also like the fact that you didn't make Rarity's hair perfect, because she is sleeping. It is very cute how you have Spike watching her. I have a few suggestions to make it more humorous. Maybe it will give you other ideas, too. Maybe you can make it where Spike is trying to give her a kiss in her sleep. Or you can have him up with breakfast made. Basically what am tring to allude to you is that we all now Spike likes Rarity, so try to express that n the drawing. But it's just a suggestion, like I said. You don't have to take my advice. But I think you did a fine job. Keep up the good work!!