Once again English is not my first language so please everyone be patient
I seen tons of pony related at everyone has a different piece to add to the great community and each one is unique.
But this is something amazing words cannot make Justice to the dedication you put on this pieces. The amount of detail is not only what makes this piece of art something extraordinary is the way that you have capture the essence of the farm and the characters involved on the image we are looking right now.
Shadows, lights in perfect harmony I just love them all of them.
this is a critique for all your pieces that i had the pleasure to see today for the first time
thank you for doing this and keep the amazing work
Hey, this is such a super duper beautiful picture.
Applebloom helps Scootaloo to fly perfectly while performing a Loopty-Hoop performance, Sweetie Belle, Fluttershy and Derpy are watching them delightfully, Granny Smith is having a nap on a rocking chair, Applejack has got her hooves dirty and Rainbow Dash is sleeping on a top of a barn with Pinkie Pie
I really like how you made some shading to the hills perfectly, the stars (and rarely clouds) are beautiful and the trees have slightly stunning shading.
I wonder if the Cutie Mark Crusaders have their own cutie marks shortly after making a successful attempt...
A month ago you asked if I could give you input as you worked on the early stages of this, but I've been taking summer classes so the time I had for keeping up with my DA messages has been pretty much nil; I apologize for my absence. However, looking through this one, I can tell you right off the bat that the lighting here suffers almost none of the problems I noted on the previous works; it feels much more natural for the scene. The only two things I noted that could possibly be improved would be a boost in the color saturation of the red hutches on the right, and the shade of the sky and background seems to indicate it's a bit later in the evening (maybe an hour or so) than the rest of the lighting in the foreground would suggest. Overall, I think the sweet spot lays somewhere in between panels 3 and 4 in the montage, and I'm leaning a bit more heavily towards 3.
Someone told me that Scootaloo is actually suffering from a handicap where she can't fly at all! They went on to say the episode would be focus on how friends can help their friends who suffer from disabilities and how the person (or pony) can deal with these problems.
Creative use of Applebloom's stunt, very cute inclusion of AJ, Dash, Pinkie, and Derpy (because I'm assuming Fluttershy's doing more of the work of coaching and such), and as with the others, great job all in all. It's a shame this series has to come to an end, but I'm looking forward to seeing what else you have to offer.